Re: ::::::||VU_Askari(MIT)||:::::: CS601 - First Assignments

Asalam o alikum !

Question no 2 ka answer:

1.      After planning 10,000 berry plants, the deer came into out botanist's farm and crushed them.(un clear) (clarity)

2.      After our botanists had planted 10,000 berry plants, the deer came into the farm and crushed them. (clarity)

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3.      I am sorry the point was not clear; here is another version.(more tact ful) (Courtesy)

4.      I rewrote that letter three times; the point was clear. (tactless)(Courtesy)

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5.      I am delighted to announce that we have extended our office hours to make shopping more convenient. (We-attitude)(Consideration)

6.      You will be able to shop evenings with the extended office hours. (you-attitude)(Consideration)

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7.      In 1996 the GMAT scores averaged 600; by 1997 they had risen to 610.(Concrete)( Concreteness)

8.      Students' GMAT scores are higher. (Vague)(Concreteness)

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9.      We hereby wish to let you know that our company is pleased with the confidence you have reposed in us. (wordy)(Conciseness)

10.  We appreciate your confidence. (Concise)(Conciseness)

On Tue, Nov 1, 2011 at 12:42 AM, anna hameed <annahameed91@gmail.com> wrote:

plz sent me idea solution ENG201

On Mon, Oct 31, 2011 at 8:57 PM, mc110400443 Syed Arslan Tahir <mc110400443@vu.edu.pk> wrote:

AOA

Question no 1:

Bus topology use ho gee us ki waja yeh hay


Star topology aur Linear Bus topology ko mila k Tree topology banti hay tu tree toplogy kaisay directly use ho sakti hay Leather firm ma, albata Bus topology ko agar use kia jayy ya attach kia jayy multiple star topologies k sath tu wo connect ho jain gayy and tree topolgy form ho geee means banay gee.


Regards
Arslan - Ahmad

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